1.) If you could rewrite any part of the story, which part would you rewrite and WHY?
2.) How would you rewrite it? (Minimum of 5 sentences - I know that most of you will write one or two paragraphs)
3.) Make sure you have clearly explained #1 and #2 with full and complete sentences.
If i had to rewrite one part of holes i would choose to rewrite when Stanley first went into the "Wreck Room." I would probably write it with more information and detail. In the story they are in a way vague about what the "Wreck Room" looks like. I would metion what some of the other people in the room look like and how many are there. I'd also describe alittle more abou how messed up the place is. Although it doesn't tell tons of information about the "Wreck Room" i think they put enough that is necessary.
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